The triveni is a form that Gulzar began experimenting with in the mid-1960s. It gets its name from the fact that it is composed of three lines. It is different from other three-line forms like the haiku and senryu, which have a fixed limit on the syllable count and in essence describes one image.
As Gulzar says, “I called it triveni because the first two lines meet like the Ganga and the Yamuna and complete a thought, it forms a poem on its own. But beneath the two there is the subterranean flow of another, the Saraswati. Hidden. Not visible to the eye. The triveni intends to reveal the Saraswati. The third line, lost in the first two, either changes the meaning of the poem altogether, its focus, or gives it a surprising twist, in the process creating an entirely new poem altogether.’
Trivenis were first published in the Hindi magazine Sarika, in 1972-73, when Kamleshwar was its editor. In the forty years since then, the form has been widely disseminated and used by a number of poets.
Presenting: ten trivenis by Gulzar.
The bird in flight saw only this:
A branch waving its arm for long
To say goodbye? Or to call it back?
Wonder how and where it will attack
It’s only life I am scared of
Death – well, it will strike just once.
It visits us all, without fail, when it’s time
Death is just – there’s nothing less or more about it
Why doesn’t life visit everyone in all fairness?
Why is the newspaper wet today?
Time to change the hawker from tomorrow.
‘Five hundred villages washed away in floods.’
Look! The full moon, all afire
Long will it be radiant tonight!
Only to turn to ash when it’s amavas.
Had seen it perched on night’s tree only yesterday
The moon, ripe, about to fall from the sky
The sun had come – search him!
Like a lonesome firefly in a berry bush
A drop glitters in the cascading hair
Why complain of a leaking roof!
Tell your eyes not to raise their voice thus
In the midst of such a crowd
People begin to recognise me by name
The gulmohar on the banks of dusk,
Like vermilion in the parting of Laila’s hair
Poor thing – she has been converted!
Neither tiffs at dawn, nor dusk’s restlessness
Fire neither in the kitchen, nor in the heart
How peacefully sad I live at home
Night and day lie scattered as if
A necklace of pearls has come undone
You had kept me pieced together
Delved deep into the body and soul
And turn this bag of rags upside down
Who knows! A battered god might emerge!
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